all i wanted was nothing i needed
when wanting
my need
superceded
i was told life is work
i was taught to work hard
i never knew faith
i thought
to control
even the sun
had to learn
without spin
the earth burn
even the sun
cannot control
all it made
all it touched
verdant spring
so inspired
even the sun
needs some faith
every night
to surrender
every night
we remember
every life
owes a debt
toward the sun
every morning
when the light comes
every life
looks up
to credit
the sun
its creation
far away
from me now
may my blood
sweat and tears
be the same
so my needs
my want
supercedes
without it
the darkness
eternally
leads
Simply illuminating and brilliant!!!
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Thank you stgreenie xo
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Reblogged this on stgreenie and commented:
Tremendous poetry
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Very well written. π I agree that we need faith, faith in love, in better life… But I prefer faith without religion.
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Thanks Kristy! Ya, i agree. If religion helps someone, im happy for them. But faith does exist for me, outside of religion
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You are welcome! π I don’t like how religions divide people, instead of connecting them.
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Great stuff, Katya. Nice imagery, lovely connecting the earth and sun to day and night, and our own needs and wants. Workin’ for the man etc! But bringing it beyond the everyday. π
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Thank you Richard!
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